[HAIKU IN RETROSPECT]
THE MUSIC FOR THIS WINDING WALK... LISTEN AS YOU TAKE IN THE EXIBIT...
NEVER DONE HAIKU BEFORE SO BE LIGHT ON ME.
[WINTER KILL]
BREATH OF AIR CONDENSED
WINTER ON COLD WIND ARRIVES
WARM STEEL OF PISTOL GRIP
[HER NATURE]
She like summers day
Warm light filtering through leaves.
Glint of blade revealed
[ON THE PORCH]
Hummingbird hanging
Suspended visually
Thunder distantly
[REJUVENATED]
Son of suns drips tears
Sucked into the dirt, filtered
Rain so pure falling
[THE DESCENT]
Angels wings raising dust
Clouds of biting grains swirling
Man fluttering down
HER NATURE
Light through sundress streams
Hint of mound, caress of breast
Revealed in detail
[JILTED BRIDE]
Dreary day dawns grey
Heavy clouds full of moisture
The bride in white dress
[THE BATTLEFIELD]
Warriors stand ranked
Wind caresses their faces
Flowers bloom vibrantly
[WOMAN DEM]
Woman standing still
Face of stone catching moons light
Cricket in grass plays
[THE TRUTH]
Man transfixed by sky
Meteor flames in freefall
Trust dies savagely fast
[THE DARK SINGS]
Darkness call's deeply
Reverberating off walls
Soul torn asunder
[FARTHER AWAY]
The Boy cries head bowed
Moon rising from the treeline
Father tills the soil
Like everything else you tackle, excellence is the outcome. I notice a build in the strength of your haiku as you continue. I truly loved reading.
ReplyDeletethank you queen. i like this form. its so full
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